Duskglimmer

Dusky ducked into the SPEW hanger to look at all the pretty warships. Of course, none of them had been tested yet, but that would be easily remedied. Hoping no ...

So... I've decided that I'm going to make time for NaNoWriMo. I realized that I'm going to college to be a writer and if college gets in the way of ...

Does the reason really matter as long as I do?

I like the descriptions at the beginning of this piece and how you eased us into the idea of her not actually being there. At first I thought that he ...

Hey, author13! I read this through twice start to finish and here's what struck me: the dialogue is incredibly forced. Dialogue is one of the hardest things to write in ...

Chapter 2 The sun was low in the sky as Kynbessne knocked on the door. She’d stopped to wash off the extra make-up that Jennika had applied and to let ...

Wiggy - thank you. I kinda felt that the opening didn't flow right, but I couldn't tell whether it was just my over-critical side coming out or if other people ...

This is nice. I like it.

Chapter 1 Monotony is strangely predictable. Even in a new town, Kynbessne found things painfully foreseeable. She expected the thunk of her boot heels against the tightly packed dirt of ...

Okay... so... I feel like being a bit of a camera hog. I don't find many pictures that I actually feel I look good in, so when my Senior Pictures ...

I participated last year and had a blast. I would love to try again this year, but I'm gonna be in college and I am seriously doubting that I will ...

Yup. Totally and completely in love with the written word, especially when it comes from me. I can't think of a time when I haven't had a story running around ...

Dragon!

Wow... God bless. I hope its everything you hope for an more. We'll miss you.

*laughs* I was wondering when my name would get brought up. How about (just because I can't believe that no one has said it yet) Hunter and Empress Kat. From ...