Duskglimmer

Yeah. Most of this is pretty implausible. It needs some major reworking. *shudders* I'll work on it. Chapter 11 Escaping was almost easy. The King wanted me brought to him ...

The formatting is a little off. And I'd like to point out this new feature on the YWS called a "Spellchecker". I think it might become your best friend if ...

Smaur... *shakes head sadly* I'm afraid that I have to break some bad news to you. This story... it's sort of, kind of, possibly might be, just a little teeny ...

You stole my phrase!!! *jumps up and down* my phrase! But I forgive you... And the singing quartet is awesome... Hmm... I'm the fourth person to say that... think there's ...

*blinks* It seems we have alot of characters with rather foul mouths... try to keep that to a minimum, guys. I'll have to ask Nate about the specific rules about ...

Nate, you triksy fellow. You almost got me... but you got me really confused before I realized that you were trying to fool people. Before that, I just thought that ...

Thumbs up so far, anyways. I love your writing style, especially as it's so different from my own. Only thing I would say is that sometimes it can be hard ...

Up to 29 hours and some odd number of minutes (I can't remember right now). I didn't catch up as much as I would have liked on Saturday. In fact... ...

There are a few books that I reread. They're mostly my favorites and every time I read them, I pick up on something new. For instance: I just reread Emily ...

*singsoffkey* - yes. I was rather proud of Distance for that. lol. Kay Juran - *blushes* thank you. But I have to admit, I have a really really hard time ...

We're here to help. I'd only include the relevent dialogue. If there is something serious being discussed, but then the topic changes to something less serious for the rest of ...

Smaur - that's a nifty little code there, now isn't it... *sets up her progress bar, even if it's only for her own satisfaction* And speaking of progress... I just ...

Okay... I'm posting the next chapter because I was asked to. Just as a warning, I haven't looked at this in a little over forever, and this is just being ...

Amber egg? :shock: What is it?! lol. Anways, as a beginning, this was pretty good. The only problem I had with it was that you don't have alot of sentence ...

he he he... I bet it is... But then, I bet there's also a limit there that you don't want to cross because you love him so much, yes? Anyways, ...