Duskglimmer

Necessary? Absolutely not. Conflict is necessary, but that can be done without violence. There are times, however, when you are forced into it and there's simply no other way to ...

As the others have said, if you flesh it out with some original/quirky characters and such, then I think this could be very good. Unfortunately, it also has the potential ...

I have to admit, it seemed somewhat contrived to me that this would all happen because he was so nervous about proposing to her. I mean, it was cute and ...

I've been trying to figure out how I would write it, but I honestly can't figure it out. I don't think I've ever written a male character that would actually ...

I, too, am very confused as to why you put it up if you didn't want it read. And just for the record, I actually obeyed the title's instructions every ...

don't go scaring her with talk of SPEW just yet, Poor_Imp... we're not that scary... and anyways, half of us are mods as well. :P But anyways, Welcome Megan! I ...

To be honest, I didn't really know what to make of the dialogue at the single's table. On one hand, I liked it because it seemed so real. But, on ...

*looks at sentence* lol. you're right. It should be taut. I wonder how a voice can be "taught"? *giggles to self* And yeah, the shoulder thing did come from you, ...

Well, then... allow me to say "PLEASE NOVELIZE THIS!" I felt bad about coming in here and complaining after people said they liked it so much, but it feels a ...

It was a pretty interesting read. I like the idea behind it a lot. I think you could do a better job of wrapping it up than stating "the moral ...

I remember you. You recognized the song in my profile and therefore were dubbed awesome. lol. Okay... so we all remember you, but I haven't heard a lot of "welcome ...

Her armor rocks. *laughs at herself* yeah, that sounds pretty random and such, but it does. I think I want it.

*smacks forehead* Now why didn't I think of that! *groans at her own stupidity* Thank you. So much. I had thought about different fonts, but I wouldn't be able to ...

Crayon - no, I haven't brought five in before this. I didn't really see that I needed an angry voice for Jenn until I started writing this one... Mesh - ...

*considers that* It would avoid confusion, but the entire flow of the piece would be knocked out of whack. I don't think that that's really gonna be workable. Thanks for ...