Duskglimmer

Yeah. It's about someone real. *smiles thinking of him* And yes, he feels the same way. I wrote this because he's currently a couple hundred miles away since I'm on ...

Two-line game

My boy speaks Japanese. It sounds gorgeous. But I can't speak a word of it.

I don't know much about Lord of the Rings... I've read them, but long ago I did so... Who cares if that Eowen chick liked him. I'm a evil member, ...

"well... I'm glad that I was stuck in the window right next to the phone..." What would you say/do if you could suddenly walk through walls.

Improv Comedy

I'm not exactly sure Where you are right now You may be in your room Or you may still be at school But wherever you are I'm too far away ...

I absolutely love this stanza: night has fully broken now releasing a scattering of stars spilling a silk ink that dyes the sky a haunting purple i lie beneath it, ...

Unfortunetly, I have to agree with Chanson. I think you over used the descriptions. As you read the poem it took too much time to try and figure out what ...

"Well... okay... so... *sits down next to crush* What's going on inside your head?" What would you do if you suddenly realized that the boy that you've known since you ...

Unheard

Yes, that's taters... taters, precious...

Heya. Thank you for commenting. I made a few changes to the stanzas that you all mentioned. Let me know if you think it's any better. Thanks a bunch.

I loved it. I hate posting on someone's work and not being able to give SOMETHING that I thought could have been improved, but I just loved this so much. ...

You won't get any arguement from me there. I love the books to bits. If I didn't know that i would get slaughtered, I would want to meet the drow.