Duskglimmer

I haven't talked to you in ages You haven't talked to me We've spoken Said hello Passed words back and forth In the air between us But we haven't talked ...

I have to agree with Chevy, the word "idol" just rings really wrong in my head. And as for my role models... well... I can't say that I've ever had ...

NICE. I really liked that last part in the parantheses. The rest of it was sort of a jumble, but it worked. And I hope it helped you vent and ...

I know it's nothing new to say, but I'm confused. I like the color contrasts. And I keep thinking that there's something in this and it's just not clicking, so ...

You used to tell me things were safe That I could be myself around you Open up and let myself feel And you wouldn't take the amunition I was giving ...

It was a bit long, but over all, well done. The title made me think it was a "this can't ever be" sort of poem, but you surprised me. I ...

Shortest: 99 days (it would have been shorter if I'd only realized what an idiot he was sooner...) LongestL 105 days and counting.... I don't expect it shall end any ...

"Appear beside my bed? Hon, I sleep in a coffin..."

For me, it was a little hard to read. I think more people would probably read it if you broke it up a little and made smaller chunks to help ...

Tell them that they're insane and live for at least 50 more years. What would you do/say if someone told you that they were 200 years old?

ferris wheel

Yes, but the fact that only some of it rhymes, does make it sound a little odd.

Napanee

What weird and inbred dog are you? Komondor

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