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*blinks* well... this is very interesting... I love how threads go off topic and then it takes someone else coming in to put it back on track... But as for ...

I had a lot of difficultly keeping my attention on this. For some reason I kept getting lost in the lines and the wording and wondering just what you were ...

Oooo... that looks fun... but I don't have an idea for anything that I'm not already working on... and since you can't have anything writtten yet... *sighs* maybe I'll just ...

*feels like she came in late but still wishes the birthday girl a very sweet sixteen*

*blinks* it really exists? *goes to tell all her friends she wasn't crazy then joins the conga line*

I like it. It was nice and simple and got out what it needed to say.

firstly, "mear" should be "mere", but that's a just a spelling error and is easily fixed. The poem itself is on something that I think just about every writer has ...

*blinks* wow... I... was not expecting that. *is unsure whether to laugh or just continue blinking* I don't know what you were aiming for, but you certainly got a reaction ...

I really liked the first two stanzas, but after that things felt just a little cliched to me... but that may be because I've heard so many people say this ...

It scares me at times, but there are some animes that I really enjoy... and it's just the difference between our culture and the Japenese culture that makes it so ...

Arieda Bobo J. Haux *singsoffkey* Hunter Mesh Boni Bee And a billion other people that are simply awesome. *sends hugs out to all the YWS members*

I liked the images and how it all flowed together, I just don't feel like it ever really connected to the reader and started to make sense. It feels like ...

I love the shading job, Hunter!! *mutters to self wondering why everyone can shade but her, then smiles and is happy for Hunter* It reminds me of something (the style, ...

I have to agree with xanthan gum... I absolutely loved that last stanza. Really fantastic. *gives a thumbs up*

*blinks* *doesn't know what else to say so...* Go Baseball!!!