Duskglimmer

Dusky was not accustomed to seeing anyone else from the fleet while she was out on her missions. Occasionally, she'd meet up with an automated messenger from command, and even ...

Personnel YWS Name : Duskglimmer (Dusky) Review Stars : One blue, four yellow. Appearance/Description (for the purposes of Fan-fiction) : Dark-haired and dark-eyed. Five foot five, athletic build, but

Creativityrules - I like the style of this piece - it's very smooth and use of language is great. Your pacing is also very good, and you definitely leave the ...

Chapter 1 Kaela walks with a limp. She favors her left foot, but as she grew up she learned to move with deliberate measure to mask the unevenness of her ...

MooMooMonko - I have to admit that my first reaction to this piece is confusion. There's a lot going on here and I'm not sure I caught it all. Still, ...

Rahul - I'm not entirely sure what comments you are hoping to recieve from this synopsis, so I'm just going to give comments as best I can. This sounds like ...

My suggestions are few and far between. This was very engaging and I got swept up in it almost immediately. I really like the character of the main girl, and ...

Hello, I just graduated with a degree in Classical Studies (all things Ancient Greek and Roman), so I couldn't resist weighing in here. A soldier's living conditions for the most ...

Hey Way2Dawn, I found your first chapter online this morning and thought it looked interesting, so I'm trying to catch up on the prologue so I can read it. :) ...

There is always a crack. A crack in the mirror, in his smile, on his lips. This is my favorite piece of the whole poem. There is a very nice ...

Hey Collision, Meaning no disrespect to Ben, I don't think you should shorten this much. There are a few places where things could be parred down a little, but for ...

It didn't look that bad until I realized that was chicken, not bread. Now, I really want to know what exec let this one pass.

Jaera: "Thank you for the offer, but no. I'm more than capable of taking care of my life by myself. Tey: "No. End of discussion." Brance: "Define 'light', for me, ...

I'm back. So many new names and faces, I don't know if anyone remembers me... but I'm back!

Hey crescent, I really enjoyed reading this. It took a little while to get moving smoothly, but by the time it ended, I really wished it had been longer. The ...