Durriedog

Hmm, thank you again! Will be re-writing soon.

Thank you for the help!!!

I origionally wrote this for a competition for my school, with the theme 'reconnect'. I don't really havce a name for it, and I don't really know if it belongs ...

DON'T CHANGE THE PLOT. I like it. I'd want to read a book like this. But I agree with Writer. The charcters are the things that make a story, not ...

As far as I've heard, they taught wealthy nobles' sons to fight with swords in their course to knighthood. They taught this just how they teach kung fu - the ...

It's really cool how you put parts of yourself into this poem, and we can really see that. However, it's confusing how you slip between typical urban living and almost ...

D@y Dre@mer, your review is done. xLogan and Fruit, yours are coming up ;).

D@y Dre@mer, your review is done. xLogan and Fruit, yours are coming up ;).

This is a story I wrote last year, to be more truthful a novel :D, and it's pretty long so I'm going to have to post it in sections. I ...

Here are some examples of my reviews; You will see I do a full-story review. I can review with punctuation editing as well, or just the classic sense check and ...

Hey its IR here. This is the background of a character in a story im writing. Check the main story out, its Ballad of Blood, in fantasy. Tell me what ...

I pushed my legs to go faster through the snow white forest. < ( ahh... not a strong start. ) My heart was pounding so loudly, I was sure they ...

Rodney, Blake, James, Fleck, Michael, Josh, Brian, Ryan, Joshua??? This is a fantasy character, and you'll understand she's of the Fire tribe if you read the first chapter of my ...

Rome

Wow that's wierd, my name is Kate too! Really good work, but the story seemed a little slow/emotionless to me. Emphasis on the emotionless; especially in the last paragraph. It ...