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Re: Gold.
“Look at her, she’s no shame.” < (maybe try 'She's no shame' or something, it's more uprupt.) “Absolutely no sense of modesty, can’t believe she has the nerve-” The murmurs ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Reconnect
Because they hold so much air, Pen! It's happened to me before!
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: The Fountain of Youth
Name: Yellow Side! Age: 21 Description: Bright blue bandanna given to her by a diseased sweetheart, brown hair twined with barbed string that was recently cut (spikey now), regularly scowling ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Animal Biography?
Options or tips; I say, try to start off with stories about animals you know a lot about and do lots of research. Then, think of things that would apply ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: The Ouraul Pt. 1
The Antigone hung in the atmosphere of the gas giant. < (not a good start, try something longer with less complicated words, maybe. ) Its long boxy < (boxy. A ...
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Removed #4
I think it should have something to do with water, because you mention that alot. Maybe 'Drifting', or 'Drifted'? Hope it helped. Durrance :smt023
Jan 3, 2010 -
Re: Modern-day Sphinx
Try youtube :lol: I saw a tutorial on drawing tiger paws, and I thought 'it would be awesome to draw one of them facing me, but more like a lion, ...
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: Rawr!
Another Rant Mimsy!
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: Modern-day Sphinx
This is a pic of a character I made up and drew called Mimsy Rant. She has (so far :lol: ) no urges to be in a story of any ...
Dec 29, 2009 -
Re: Durrie's Newb Photos!
Thankyou! And Snoink, the fruits are mangoes!!!
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: Durrie's Newb Photos!
Hay all! Durrance here! Got a new camera for Christmas (kinda like duh!) and just thought I'd share the best pics with ya'll. Hope you like! Criticism welcome. Oh, and ...
Dec 28, 2009 -
Re: Does anyone elses eyes change colors?
Mine change from green to blue to grey :smt003
Dec 26, 2009 -
Re: Bleach: Hitsugaya Toushirou
The hairline is too far down his forehead, unless it's supposed to be that way... The eyes are brilliant... yep, that's all from me!!! Durrance
Dec 23, 2009 -
Re: Show and Tell
Thankyou! *I have issues* :D
Dec 16, 2009 -
Re: The YWS 2009 Yearbook
I joined in July this year because on another writing site, Afeefah and I were the only active members. Then one day Afeefah found YWS and asked me to join, ...
Dec 8, 2009
