Durriedog

Thankyou! That was helpful. I think I'll re-write that part... 'twould be wise.

Thanks :D This might sound far-fetched, but Balema is completely flat except for mountains etc. Also each territory is quite large. Just wanting to clear that up... Silly Durrie. Durrance ...

... *mouth falls open in shock*

You know you're a writer when you start calling your friend your character's name...

Some medievil dude in a forest with a hood over his head, one foot on a rock and a hawk on his shoulder xD

Bard

"Call up more air. Ha ha, palagrith victory..." ~ Sam What would YOURS do? *interested*

"Umm... I know! Mentos! I'm a sucker for Mentos." *grins* ~ Sam "Oremi tartlets with chocolate! They're the best!" ~ Andrew "Hoi!" *Elbows Andrew* "Get your own favorite sweet thing!" ...

Durrie like!!! Among the hundreds of party guests, waiters and decorations, < (no comma) many things in the enormous party hall at the Delyle home could be easily overlooked. One ...

Thank you!

Thank you! :smt023 Your first review for almost a year? *feels special* :lol: I will take your reviews to heart. :D Durrance

So this is a tree-hugger poem and my first poem ever, so... don't be too brutal. Please? :lol: Here goes - *deep breath* ~~~~~~ Them that can’t look past their ...

A story I wrote for a competition on another writing site long ago... Never posted it. I put the rating up because it's kinda scary... Still, hope you like. “The ...

Hey and Welcome! I'm sorry but you know that you won't get any reviews by begging xD There is, however, a forum where you can ask for reviews and pay ...

I like it, it's just that it doesn't look like she's wearing a shirt, just the sleeves. Weird. I also think her eyes look funny, but I can't figure out ...