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Thank you Stori and ItalianIllumnist. I guess what I meant to say is I'm new at writing fiction (not writing in general). The piece I posted here is my first ...

Hello ZlyWilk! After reading your reviews I must say I'm a big fan. I like how detailed and thorough you are. It looks like you haven't had any review requests ...

I actually know exactly how you feel. I also write in third person, and find great difficulty using the first person POV. I totally understand what you mean. I would ...

Hey DragonGirl11! This topic is still open right? Edit: Would you look at this one for me: Thanks in advance!

Welcome to YWS! I'm a new member as well. Just getting my feet wet around here. From what I understand you can post a link to your work in the ...

I know what you mean Satan. It definitely makes sense. I shouldn't have said "background information". What I meant was "character development". The problem is that my story isn't the ...

Hi Twit! I have been reading several of your reviews and I must say I am very impressed. So I would be honored if you would take a shot at ...

*Hands over Critic Clinic application* Hello afredsymon! I would be very grateful if you could lend me your expertise on this one: It's a little long (3000+ words), so save ...

Thanks for the clarification Kyllorac. I'm a little worried though that the beginning of my story (first 4 chapters) doesn't have enough tension. I'm using the beginning as mostly background ...

Is there anyway to test the accuracy of this program? I entered my own writing and got a score of 6, 71 Then I entered a chapter of George R.R. ...

Haha Edited, (How could I forget the 80's!) The bands of the past were just so much better in my opinion. I already mentioned Metallica from the late 80's/ early ...

This was helpful Satan, Thank you. I'm new to writing fiction and this seems like it will be a great help in getting me started. My only questions are about ...

I didn't read the whole thread, but the story idea from the topic creator sounds similar to a manga/anime called 'Monster'. In that story, the main characters travel all over ...

Hello again YWS! OK so a bit about myself. My name is Stan. I'm 25 a year old male. I live in California, but I'm originally from Washington state. My ...

Hello YWS! So after a few days of poking around I finally decided to join up. My observation has revealed that this forum is pretty cool. Let me start off ...