DudeMcGuy

Hello Blues, It's DudeMcGuy again. Well, if you need additional material then you can review this: This is the first chapter of my novel (edited version split into two parts). ...

Hello there Rubic, I'm somewhat of a new fantasy writer. Is it alright if I get the ball rolling for you? I'm currently working on this: It is the prologue ...

*Stumbles into thread* "What am I going to do with all this pink elephant food?" Oh, hello Shearwater. Would you take a look at this when your not too busy? ...

Hello Blues, Mind taking a shot at this one when you have the time? Fantasy story. I've been working on this one on and off for the last month or ...

Well well. It seems I have opened up quite the theoretical cookie jar. All kidding aside, you've already been a tremendous help. I am interested in what else you have ...

Sorry, I should have provided more context. As far as I can tell my style varies and does not fit a single "type" of third person. It's more on a ...

OK, first of all just let me admit that I am a natural infodumper. A couple months on these boards have revealed to me that my instinct is to just ...

Hey ShadowVyper! If you still need more review material, would you mind taking a look at this? (Ch.1 in two parts. It was too long on it's own) This is ...

Hello again Twit! I'm back to request another review. We had a great back and forth about my "prologue" so I came back for more of your awesome opinions. Would ...

Hello again GPGirl. You said you enjoyed my previous work, so here is Ch.1: (Part 1) (Part 2) It takes place in a different time/setting than the prologue I wrote ...

To stay in past tense you need to put "It was Friday night". If you feel that part of it needs to be in present tense (because it feels right ...

Best. Forum. Ever. Seriously, where else on the internet am I going to get four replies as good as those in a 30 minute stretch? Yahoo answers, wikianswers, eat your ...

Calling on the Experts here! I need some advice regarding a fantasy novel I'm working on. First of all, I'm familiar with the "Show, don't Tell" approach to writing (I'm ...

At the very top of the page (when you've logged in) you will see "username", "Dashboard", and "Add new work." It's the third option. You paste your writing into the ...

I posted this piece in several other threads a few weeks ago, but haven't heard back yet. I should just be patient and wait, but I saw your empty thread ...