DudeMcGuy

OK this post is a response to Karzkin. In particular, the last post and the bit about the 6th commandment and rape, adultery, etc. Now let me preface this by ...

Hi Shearwater, Sorry to just add to the pile, but you said to let you know when my story continued. So here is the latest chapter: From the looks of ...

Hello Shadow, I've completed Ch.4 If you would like to take a look at it. This one took a while to finish. I hope you enjoy reading it. Let me ...

I...have...returned! Hello again Rubric, Will you take a look at Ch. 3 (parts 1 + 2) for me? This chapter (and possibly the next two) are more character/background focused than ...

Hello UnlockedParadox, First of all let me say welcome to YWS. I've only been here like 3 months myself. But I can tell you that you will get used to ...

Hello Twit, So here I am once again, seeking your assistance :) I recently posted Ch. 3 of my story. (Two parts again this time) Part 1: Part 2: I ...

Hello again Shearwater, I have returned to ask for your review of Chapter 3: (broke it up into parts again) part 1: part 2: (I tried to implement your advice ...

Hey PatriciaTina, Thanks for the quick reply to my PM. Alright, I uploaded Ch.3 yesterday (in two parts), I would like to know what you think of it : It ...

Hello again Rubric! It is I, DudeMcGuy! Your most loyal customer! I am here to request another critique from you. Could you take a look at Ch.2 for me? This ...

Hello Rubric, I noticed that you haven't received any more requests here lately. (Which is a shame, because your critiques are wonderful.) So I've come to request your opinion on ...

Hey Shearwater, I've completed Ch.2 of my story and it's up now. This one was pretty challenging, any advice you have to make it better would be awesome. I didn't ...

Hey Blues! Chapter 2 comin' at cha'! : If your not too busy that is. . . Whenever you get around to it is fine. I'm a patient person :)

Well, I have coached 6-8th grade basketball and used to play in HS myself, so I am quite familiar with the game. It's also my favorite sport which I watch ...

Hi Shadow! Got more material for ya: This is chapter 2 of the "dragon story" I've been working on. You said you really enjoyed the last chapter, so here is ...

Twit! I'm Ba~ack! OK, so no one has posted here for a while so I thought I would bump your thread up a bit. I love your detailed reviews and ...