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Re: If I Die Tomorrow
If I die tomorrow, Will the memories fade to gray? Will all of this confusion Ever have something to say? If I die tomorrow, I hope you know just one ...
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Re: Outline?
I do characters, plot and usually try to do chapter by chapter, what's going to happen. But my writing is shitty anyway.
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: Untitled, chapter 1
Damnit, I do always have trouble with telling not showing. The punctuation marks, my computer did that, couldn't make it normal. I really don't get it! Sigh, I know you ...
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: The Garden
Right, first off, I like it. I watched a tv show about this so it intrigued me. One thing I think you shoudl do is make the tone less conversational. ...
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: starting something
So, this should be rated R because you say fuck in it. Just a little thing. I was pretty confused as to what was going on. I know it's good ...
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: Untitled, chapter 1
This is the first chapter, quite short but I hope it grabs your attention. If you hate it, tell me. If you don't, please tell me also. :oops: All I ...
Dec 8, 2008 -
Re: Favourite and Least Favourite Words!
Favourite: there's so many to choose from! Eeek! I like despite, because it's sort of like in spite of, which is just cool. Least Favourite: Moist or cascaded...eww Favourite French ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: Getting Back to writing
yeah, what's doing, maaaate? lol enough of being bogan (Aussie version of redneck) I recently performed in a production of Bang Bang You're Dead, a play about a high school ...
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Re: Killer Instinct - Prologue
I really liked this, it reads alot like James Bond. Hope that's a good thing! I love the way you really caught he scenery and used humour to make us ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: What's your Favorite Poem(s)?
i carry your heart with me i carry your heart with me(i carry it in my heart)i am never without it(anywhere i go you go,my dear; and whatever is done ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: 1984
I read it when I was 13 or 14 I think and I loved it! So engrossing. Such a book. I also loved animal farm. Suprsisingly, I really like his ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: Broken Me
I don't really like ripping things up. To be honest, if something is terrible, I wouldn't bother to critique it. Broken Me Silence fills the shadows of my heart, (maybe ...
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: Doll
You sorta actually did get the meaning. I didn't mean like an actual whore, just a normal sexual human being. Is that PG 13 enough?
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [5]
Thats me all dolled up for a formal dance. My hair isn't really that curly :(
Dec 7, 2008 -
Re: Prologue of my story
Prologue The still summer night was silent. Nothing moved, not even the leaves covering the many trees. A thin mournful howl suddenly split the air, piercing through the scilence like ...
Dec 7, 2008
