Ducati

I will totally review this when my brain wakes up. :D

Could you please review the revised version down the bottom of my thread here I'm also looking for advice on whether you think it could be included in some larger ...

Edited and updated version: It is strange that the things we remember from our childhood are so often the things that determine the adults we have become. Does our brain ...

That all you got? *Has ominous feeling she will be caught out by being in a different timezone* 8)

Could you please review my story, Jimmy, in other fiction? It's a bit of a step out of my comfort zone, so if you feel the need to beat me ...

The edited version I have posted below. Please review that. Thankyou. Short story at the moment, I wrote something similar on a creative writing camp, but I'm think maybe I ...

I wasn't clear on this: I wrote this in reflection recently on how I felt then. It's a new poem.

I guess tone of voice is hard to get over the internet. I must have misread arrogance in your reply.

Hey, I did the Preface and I might do the first chapter but as I said I don't really do multiple chapter requests unless I'm so inclined. I like some ...

______________________________ PREFACE My body flirted with the shadows. One moment, I was in plain sight, easy to spot even in the shadows. Repetition of shadows not good!! Combine the last ...

Done and done. 8)

Note: [u] My Father - much to our surprise , was back at work, much more concealed now. His company worked solely for Jewish people, before the war he had ...

Chapter 5 When they arrived at Coal Yard Lane, Mr Murdoch insisted on accompanying Anne back upstairs to her house. Henry made no move to second the offer, instead he ...

If it's so brilliant, then you obviously don't need my opinion. Sorry I wasted my time.

Thank you for your very lengthy review, do you know, I'd forgotten I'd even asked for it! I will make some changes to the stanza you mentioned, it has always ...