Ducati

Not meaning to pick on anybody, but the other day I almost laughed myself to death when I read this in a serious review. Cliches are so overused. :wink: Got ...

You know you're a writer when you get annoyed a people who say a historical. It's an historical!

Weakness. I find it so compelling.

Nope, not since I was 5. The user below me has seen gone with the wind in it's entirety

First off, the mother is awesome. I love the dialogue. Reminds me of, well I can't quite remember. BUt of something very funny. With that, she burst into melodramatic tears. ...

Wind blows across the rain-slick street, sliding through my open coat. I shiver but don't zip it up; it makes me look fat. Instead, I hunch my shoulders, put my ...

Done silver sunlight's and angel's symphony's. Oh and wolf's also.

She wasn’t going to get pregnant. She wasn’t ever going to get pregnant. I think couldn't get pregnant is clearer. The opening lines confused me as to if his wanted ...

Hi, I've been summoned here to review for you. It's a bit long for a line by line, but I will point a few off sounding sentences. Valentina’s silvery voice ...

Better get writing then, slave driver :D

I noticed you were about so could you please review my story Jimmy. Sorry I haven't done your review yet. I'm kind of medically out of it. But i can't ...

Mission Accomplished. I could write sort of a shamela version of something one day, i swear.

The faeces slipped from my colon like a calf from a cow's womb. *shudders at her own horribleness*

I probably be published after I die :roll: If I wrote something that I really thought was brilliant, I would submit it, but until then I'm really just exercising my ...

If you're really struggling with getting the words on paper, and constantly hating everything you are writing, but you really like your idea, what should you do? I can't churn ...