Ducati

It's poetry, so don't chuck rocks at me.

I would like it better if people split their chapters up into two parts. It's quite daunting to be faced with an entire chapter to fix up. Also the rate ...

You know you're a writer when you don't actually write anything, but agonise for ages over what to write, ending up with no words, a glaring, obstinately empty white page ...

And there it was...spooky. It was invisible like the first two times I checked.

Ok this is the edited version thanks to some very helpful comments, please tell me if you have any further advice. If oceans were not infinitely deep And horizons just ...

I can't actually see your review...did you post it under a different user name?

onay :lol:

Led Zeppelin. American or British Classics?

Could you review this, pretty please?

Edited version further below, you can review that or this, what ever you like :D If oceans were not infinitely deep and horizons just a figment of my eye if ...

Present tense hurts my soul.

Couldn't be further from the truth. TPBM Can name two songs by the Clash

You may need a month of bedpans and slab baths to refresh just how little work you aides have to do on this ward. One flew over the cukooe's nest.

Thriller or The way you make me feel.

Sometimes, I imagine myself to be one of them. Hips swaying, chest rising and falling, prancing forward on legs like slim pillars, laughs pouring out from shimmering lips. It will ...