Drownsinapuddle

Invisible Pain “Her stitches must be invisible”. Clawing away at her skin, She bleeds. The next day, she heals, No scars to be shown. She cries, Wanting help from the ...

Even when I did like your repition of "It is" and "Yet...", it got annoying. Also, in the second line, "Yet far, oh so far.", it seems wrong. Maybe it ...

Yes, I agree with Claudette. The rhyming was a bit off and didn't really need to be there. Sometimes, ((Learning from my English teacher bare with me XD)) rhyming doesn't ...

Tears slowly falling, Scars all over my heart, You want me to feel this pain. My love slowly dies, My heart begins to ache, My soul slowly leaving me. You ...

The little girl looks up at the dark, night sky, And sees a shooting star, closing her eyes. Making her wish, she opens her eyes, And sees the clouds pass ...

1. It's a place that Christians believe is the gate that lets them into Heaven ((I learned that!)) 2. Death is suppose to be capitalized, like the Grim Reaper Death. ...

Demons rising from the underworld below, Weapons in hand, all different sorts. Everything killed, hellfire falling from the blood red sky, And Lucifer stands there, laughing away at the torment. ...

In the dark room, trapped in, fearing the dread, A shadow forms, in the corner adjacent of myself. No details of the shadow appear, just the darkness that it holds, ...