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Re: Shipwreck Isle ch. 1{Edit}
I like this chapter better than the original version. It's a lot more interesting, and I like the changes you made. I don't have any problems with this chapter besides ...
Aug 15, 2010 -
Re: Blue Flames and Bloodshot Eyes (Chapter 1)
I didn't have any nitpicks besides what other people mentioned before me. I really like your writing style and the way you introduced the story. It wasn't at all boring, ...
Aug 11, 2010 -
Re: Shipwreck Isle ch. 1
Hi! This is my first review ever so I hope it's okay :) I really like your story so far, but there were some things that bothered me... It seemed ...
Aug 11, 2010