DrowningInDarkness

Trapped Have you ever felt trapped inside a lie? Your heart beats faster And you try to find a way out Desperate Panicked But you're sufficating Can't breathe  And it ...

Howdy everybody!! Sorry, but for now I'm not going to keep on writing this because there's another story I've been thinking of writing and I like it better than this ...

I like this chapter better than the original version. It's a lot more interesting, and I like the changes you made. I don't have any problems with this chapter besides ...

I like reading and writing fiction, especially romance, fantasy, and mystery. I like realistic fiction too. I used to write poetry all the time because I love to rhyme, but ...

Hallo! Wie geht's dir? Ich bin gut. Und Sie? Lol

Thanks for your feedback!! I feel like I should clear some things up though. It's a mystery, and the whole point is that you don't know who the murderer is. ...

Hey people!! I just joined Young Writer's Society today and someone told me I should introduce myself here. I'm really bad at describing myself to strangers, but I'll give it ...

I didn't have any nitpicks besides what other people mentioned before me. I really like your writing style and the way you introduced the story. It wasn't at all boring, ...

Hi! This is my first review ever so I hope it's okay :) I really like your story so far, but there were some things that bothered me... It seemed ...

I suppose this is more of a mystery novel than a romance novel, but I still felt that it belongs in the Romance catagory. Also, I'm really not that pleased ...