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I really like it, too. The only thing I find that you MIGHT want to correct (You really don't have to, I just find it slightly different to the flow ...

Wow. Thanks. The last one is interesting. Thanks again.

The boy was standing on the hill, overlooking his village. It was early in the morning, and the sun was just awakening, peaking over the distant mountains, to cast away ...

OOOOOOO!! I like it. I wish I could write like that. *Sigh* Anyways, I always have trouble with dialogue. That's a major problem.

I need help. Names elude me. :oops: (as do many other things, but I'll concentrate on names). PLEASE give me some tips/help/suggestions of names.

I'm terrified of heights. Some of them, anyways. I hate climbing trees, because I can never get down, but I like sitting on cliffs overlooking the ocean. I hate spiders ...

Man, that was brutal. I agree, though. I also think that you should have a flashback of Korin's sister's death, or his coming to the village.

I agree with EBM. I write whatever comes into my head, and then go back and just take chunks that I don't like out. It saves the time of having ...

Whoops. That was me above. Forgot to log in... heh And Iced, i'm 17 too.

Just out of curiosity, of course.

You sure seem cheerful. Why is that?

*Sigh*. I hope so. I don't write often, though, so I don't know if I'll post a story anytime soon. :oops:

Erm... Hey. I'm new here, and I'm just saying hi. I was introduced to this site by Zzap. Ah, I'm not a good writer, and so I'm not really sure ...