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  • Short Story » Historical Fiction, Historical Fiction Re: My character’s wife died.

    Hi, Fishr. I think this is a good rendition of this Samuel character mourning his wife. I liked how it was focused just on that without anything else converging or ...

    Nov 10, 2021
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Narrative Re: The Style of Mr. Edumacated

    Hello there, Simon! It's been a long time since I reviewed so please bare with me. I'm surprised that you didn't tag this under comedy but instead under action and ...

    Sep 20, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Horror Re: Sognore 8.0

    Hello there, Anamel! I remember reviewing this novel once upon a time, it feels so nice to come back to it now and read it. But I'm kind of sad ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: How Do You Plead: 9.2

    Hullo! Emotions are running haywire in this part. First, we saw a clearly pissed Winslow and a confused Reggie, and the confronted Butler crying and then, Reggie crying! Too much! ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: How Do You Plead: 9.1

    Hey, I'll say it again: I just realised that you're addressing two different timelines in this novel. I apologise for any comments made regarding the timelines. _/\_ Oh, Winslows is ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Historical Fiction, Mystery / Suspense Re: How Do You Plead: 8.4

    I'm just going to go with the flow here. I agree with Blues! When did Maxwell pass out and I thought Winslow only took one bottle from the cabinet and ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: How Do You Plead: 8.3

    I'm sorry I keep saying this. But chapter 7 and chapter 8 feels like two different stories. I was just rooting for Winslow, what is he doing here in the ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: How Do You Plead: 8.1

    Hullo! Oh, this such a contrast to the Winslow I knew from the previous chapter. Now I want to go back and start from the beginning, I want to know ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: How Do You Plead: 7.4

    Hello. I thought I was too quick to say those things about James. But this chapter only confirms what I thought, while I understand it's too early to declare love ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Historical Fiction Re: How Do You Plead: 7.3

    Hello there, Captain! These characters and this scene in particular was oddly familiar, so I spent some time checking whether I've already read and reviewed this novel. Looks like I ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Souviens-toi que tu vas Mourir (Part IIII)

    Hey! I like how you included their original letters written to each other. It was a smart decision. To me, Hamilton seems the perfect lover boy after reading these letters. ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Mon Petit Ami (Part III)

    D'aweeeeeeeeeeeee. I'm gushing! I love seeing people in love! A proper part, I'd say. It was engaging, I did not lose my concentration or trail off anywhere. Kudos to you ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Mon la Confiance (Part II)

    Hey, you. When I read the opening dialogue, I was disappointed! They JUST got to know each other, and already calling the other "honey"?! What?! And then I noticed the ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: Mon Amour (Part I)

    Aw, a feel good story. :) Hello, here I am, finally. Phew. First things first, I was thrown off by the laborious explanation of the room the character was staying ...

    Apr 14, 2020
  • Short Story » General, Historical Fiction Re: The death of Joseph Warren - an excerpt; Part 2

    Hello there. @whatchamacallit has given you a stellar review. I will keep mine short. This part was definitely better than the first. Though I thought there was a slight shift ...

    Apr 12, 2020


The best speculative fiction peels your mind and shows you the familiar from a direction you have not looked in before
— Neil Gaiman