Dreamwriter

Great job. The way you described it, the rythem, it just let me know what happened. What was going on. How it felt. Ect, ect... I don't see anything that ...

Flowers that bloom in the forest shade cannot be seen, But the light of hope shines bright in the Children's eyes. As kin they love without fault, And light the ...

I hold in my hands a tiny house, With tiny people and a tiny mouse. A cat, a dog, and a leaping frog all nestled about the tiny house. I ...

Wow. Just wow. Can you send me an autograph? If I wait a few years, then when your famous I can sell for autograph for hundreds. You will be great ...

This is kinda cool, but I couldn't feel a rythem to you words. Most all poems need rythem, and it wasn't there. Though, the intent behind your words were great.

CHAPTER 1 Unburnable Brycius looked down at the young girl in front of him. She had been stirring up trouble around the Revolt for some time now, but he was ...

Ok, I REALLY like it. You've got something going here. Could be big. The story is seems really interesting, and I like the way you described his method of healing. ...