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Re: Ink Heart & Ink Spell by Cornelia Funke
This was a totally AWESOME series! I couldn't believe how well the author put the characters together. I wasn't quite looking forward to reading it at first, but it completely ...
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: A Wrinkle in Time
It was cool. I liked it. I read it a few years ago and I remember thinking "I love this author's imagination."
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Lord of the Flies
This book would be great if you were some kind of 'nobleman' looking for the deeper meanings in life. But for the rest of the people in the world (those ...
Mar 14, 2008 -
Re: Momma's hands
My mother uses Her hands all day. She holds my hand, And I feel the age wrinkles Under my fingers. Does she like being my momma? If she had more ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Pain from affection.
Uh, woah. This is kinda cool, and I think you're going somewhere, but you're trying too hard. These words you're using, they just don't flow. (Quote) How did you creep ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: Behind you, I am there
I am here, But you don’t bother noticing. I am seen, But only in the background. I am heard, But just as static. There is a girl. She lives in ...
Mar 13, 2008 -
Re: heavenly voice
I would like to mention that this is an excerpt of a novel I am currently working on. At this point in the story, a girl named Rika and her ...
Mar 8, 2008 -
Re: Trail Mix
that was a fun poem. It was cute and to the point. It stops and makes you think. I was unique. Good job.
Mar 6, 2008 -
Re: Fairytales
This was really cute! You did a great job. You've got talent. I love your creativity. I love the way you described their escape, and the monster in their head ...
Mar 6, 2008 -
Re: Smothering me
How can I breathe With such strong emotions Smothering me? My mothers love Holds me tight, Wont let me go, Though allows me flight. I breathe easy Though I’m held ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Incapacitated
This is an example of all people's eventual inability to face themselves. It's great to be able to see these things and put it into such well woven words.
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Thought I'd try again
You had good rythem. The intent was clear. The subject made me stop and think. (That's a good thing.) You should keep it up. nice job.
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Rose Bush
This world needs more poems like this. I could really feel the elated joy behind each word. I loved how you seemed to gaze into the deeper reaches of everything. ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Teapot
Woah. So much emotion coming from a teapot. It really shows how creative you are. All poems need rythem, and yours came with a beat that came to meet me. ...
Mar 5, 2008 -
Re: Bonsoir
Wow. Good job. I could feel your turmoil leaping off the page. This is what the world needs, someone who can weave words to REALLY express themselves. Good rythem.
Mar 5, 2008
