Dreamwriter

It was cold. It was far too cold to be outside. The sun had set, and the frost had settled everywhere. The wind that rushed through the dark shadows of ...

Thanks, I appriciate your imput. :)

There’s a couple in a café. They’re sitting together at one of the abnormally small round tables. They aren’t young, but not old either. The couple keeps looking at our ...

Prophecy of the Hated Savior As Told From the Ballads of Ages Past . . She who was exiled by those who should have loved her, She who was cast ...

This is an interesting beginning. A good start. You should describe the girl and the unicorn better. Maybe the unicorn had a mane whiter than the midwinter snow, or the ...

Falling isn't as terrifying as everyone says. These were the thoughts of a young girl as she fell several hundred feet from the clouds. She fell backward, and so she ...

One more thing I forgot to mention. Please give it a better title.

You did well. An accurate definition of a poem is the right words, put in the best order, to accomidate the theme and give inspiration. You did that fairly well, ...

It was cold. It was far too cold to be outside. The sun had set, and the frost had settled everywhere. The wind that rushed through the dark shadows of ...

I like to write in my room, but I get ideas from everywhere. If I happen to have a pen and paper with me, or a computer nearby, or anything ...

She weeps after you, The selfish man Who left her. She falling down A deep, dark pit of misery As she yearns For your comforting touch. I'm stronger than her, ...

I don't really see a point to this poem. If I hadn't seem the title I wouldn't have had the slightest understanding as to what this was about. You need ...

Yeah, I can see your point and I appreciate you input. But you've got to understand, the human race has such a wide range of emotions! Most people in the ...

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