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Re: The Land of Tales~Chapter Two
Yo, yo, yo, diggy-dog!!! How's it hangin' yo? Glad to see you're moving forward with this, Meadow. You should keep going. I also think you should have continued with the ...
Mar 24, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter 15
Hey! Chapter 15 is up and ready to be torn apart by you wonderful readers. Thanks to Zan, Meadow, Staples, Livinginfantasy and AnnaGraham. Chapter 15 – The Rocker in the ...
Mar 23, 2009 -
Re: Dreams of Giants
And Dreamworx, the fact that you found my characters funny is likely due to their competitive aggressiveness. ;) Or maybe it is just you. :p Eh, who knows? Maybe I ...
Mar 19, 2009 -
Re: Life CHAPTER 2
Wow...interesting. Gruesome, too. Lots of blood and gore... Okay, first thing's first: there were waaayyy too many mistakes. Both grammatical and spelling errors. There were commas misplaced, mispelle
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter 14
Thanks a ton for your comments guys. But...*sigh* I don't think this chapter deserves your praise. I threw it together last minute in a hurry...I don't think it's as good ...
Mar 18, 2009 -
Re: The Land of Tales ~ Chapter One
* drops out of the sky and into your living room * Hey, Meadow! What's up? This was soooo good! Very enjoyable. Please point out if I changed the Horseman's ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Clover's Curse - Chapter 14
Hey, guys! I'm back with chapter 14! Finally, huh? A few things about this chapter. It's told from Dewey's perspective. I know it might be annoying how I'm jumping p.o.v's, ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: The Land of Tales ~ Chapter One
Hey Meadow! Nice to see that you're moving forward with this story. Question: What happened to the bickering brothers in the Faeries? I'd like to hear more from them. I ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: Life CHAPTER 2
Hey, Rubin! I looked over this chapter and I thought it was really good. Unfortunately, I'm trying to finish the next part of my story, so I won't be able ...
Mar 16, 2009 -
Re: LIfE
Huh. Wow. Well, that was...interesting. In a good way, I really, really enjoyed that. It's really not something you read very often. I love the MC's crude sense of humor. ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Dreams of Giants
Hey, this is really good! Particularly, the title drew me in. The dialogue flowed very well between characters, I didn't feel like any of it was forced, which is something ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Supernatural Deliverance
Whoa, are you sure you're only 13? This is good, bro! I particularly liked this sentence: This figure was not man, but was what a man would be after long ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: No title...yet (prologue)
Thanks Rubin! Unfortunately, I'm working on another project right now so I haven't written this story yet. The story I'm writing right now is called Clover's Curse. The characters in ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Supernatural Deliverance
Hey, Matt! Thought I'd swing by and read this, since you so kindly reviewed my prologue for me. I figured I'd return the favor. I promise I'll leave a review ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: The Accidental Rebellion, Ch. 1 - Fate
Sue and Sibohan are probably the most 2 dimensional because my understanding of the female mind is somewhat limited. That's okay, this is a typical flaw in most males :D ...
Mar 15, 2009
