Dreamworx95

Thanks to Livinginfantasy and zankoku_na_tenshi for reviewing Clover's Curse and not getting annoyed with my pestering messeges. A reminder, just in case you've read my previous chapters and have forg

I really like the Phsycologist. This was my favorite part: ASHLEIGH: Well maybe it was to cover the fact that I’m a wolf hunter and I spend my time murdering ...

Hehehe, this was hilarious! I love reading these thingies, they're much better than stories. One of my favorite parts was this: Superman: At least I have a book written about ...

Two words: LOVE IT. It's pure genius. Fav part: EDWARD: Yeah, but I scintillate. SNOINK: Ooooooooh. It’s Christmas time! SHINY. Priceless and hilarious. This totally made my day. You absolutely ...

The ache in my head starts to recede. I’m unsteady, I’m trembling, but now that I’m up, I think I can stand on my own. I think you should add ...

Sorry it's been almost forever since I've written a review for this, but I'm here now! So here it is. He sat upright and raised his arms, stretching his back, ...

His hair had darkened to a rich brown, his chiseled face was tan from the summer sun which set off his smoldering brown eyes. His nose was slightly bent and ...

A grassy knoll sprouted a green lushness that only summers in Aireslertt could produce. The grass seemed to whisper with pleasure as the breeze that carried a touch of cool ...

I'm back again and on chapter two of your wonderful story! It keeps getting better and better. “That may be so,” says Koreth quietly, “that may be so, but...” he ...

I'm so sorry I haven't been reviewing your work. I know that you've already posted your eighteenth chapter, but I really don't like jumping ahead in a story without reading ...

Thanks to Livinginfantasy and zankoku_na_tenshi for editing tips, wonderful critiques, and loyally continuing to read my story. Inspirational Songs: Changes by Butterfly Boucher and Cold as Ice by For

The first paragraph was a great way to start off the chapter. I think the reader can really visualize the setting. You did a great job of using the senses ...

Can you post stories here that are already posted in another section?

Thanks to Livinginfantasy and zankoku_na_tenshi. Editing help welcomed! Criticizm and writing tips wanted. Songs that inspired this chapter: Trouble With Dreams by Eels, Desperado by Eagle Chapter Thr

It was a Friday afternoon when Harvey Forest first strolled into his life. In this sentence, it sounds like Harvey Forest is strolling into his own life. I think you ...