Dreamworx95

Oooh, nice...

I think it's an altogether pretty picture, but it could use some color. Maybe a background, too because she is just floating in the air.

Aw, that's cute.

I'm supposed to colorize a black and white photo partially. This is a photo I took in the fall, some leaves were scattered around at school. I've finished the project, ...

I agree with Squall, you really don't need a prologue. I understand that maybe you want to grasp readers' attention with this, but there are just so many of these ...

But, finding myself clearly portrayed in his mirror-like eyes as an elephant, I don't get it. Does this mean he's fat? Or am I being stupid and missing something totally ...

really weird things that end with you waking up on the floor, are probably dreams. No need for the comma after floor. The smeared mirror that hung next to my ...

Thanks to Livinginfantasy, Anna Graham, zankoku_na_tenshi, Kyte and Clo for reading and reviewing. To Livinginfantasy: Here's a shout out to you! Thanks so much for the awesome reviews! They encourage

Freeeaaaky! I'd be way too scared to write something like this! I have to hand it to you for your courage! Why haven't you written more? Get on with it ...

Nice. Very well done and nicely written. It's very easy to sympathize with Liona. I felt very bad for her at the last part as she described her hunger. I ...

shinning on the dark green forest bed. at me threw yellow eyes like glass marbles, Should be through. the one’s I’ve starred Stared has only one r. I have got ...

Yay! Another Forked! Like the other ones, this one was ridiculous, gross and entertaining. It's just so strange that it makes me want to keep reading. I can honestly say ...

Yes, I do like that one better. You should use it.

Oh my god! I'm so nervous about posting this. I have about thirty pages more, but this is just the first part of the prologue. Lol, don't be nervous. It's ...

Another entertaining chapter. As I read this, I was wondering of Staples was on some hallucinogen drug, but then the plasma terrorist finally showed up. The kid with the orange ...