Dreamworx95

1. Is the use of bold and italic text helpful or jarring? I agree with Haruno Sakura. Couldn't figure out why it was there. 2. Do you feel there's too ...

Hey guys, back again with a chapter 11. So I wanted to share a few things before I posted this up. The first thing is just a re-cap of anything ...

blair, no, lol. i think it actually grew out of the science building at school. weird, huh?

Ooh, interesting. I like the narrater, sounds like someone I can relate to. Gotta say, I've never heard of a necromancer before. I'm not a fan of doom and gloom ...

So here's chapter 10. Not feeling so confident about it. Don't think it's as good as some of the others, but I guess that depends on what the readers think. ...

No, it's not a drawing. I took a black and white picture and then used photoshop to color the leaves in.

Sorry, it's small. I tried to re-size it in photobucket, but the new version has me befuddled. :?: Sigh. So here it is. We weren't supposed to color the entire ...

Yo!!! I'm baaack! Lol. Oh, shut up, I tell myself, forget it. Stop lying to yourself. He’s dead, he’s dead , okay? D-E-A-D. Dead. Do you understand that? It's about ...

Finally finished chapter nine! The more I write this story, the more I love it. Thanks to Livinginfantasy, zankoku_na_tenshi, Stori, and Anna Graham. I'm having a blast writing this story, ...

I'm baaackk!!! Mwah, ha, ha, ha! Lol. JK. Okay, first and foremost, I have to tell you something right off the bat. I noticed that a lot of the time, ...

Night Mistress: Yes, I read the actual thing. I didn't find too many things wrong with it, just that the introduction had a lot of hers and shes. It's a ...

It's for my English class. I read the Maximum Ride series and I'm doing my project on it. We were asked to include a review with our posters. Do you ...

I agree with little tin fish about that first sentence. You could take out the part about the size of the house because it's irrelevent. The other part of the ...

This is just a brainstorm of all the things I want to include in my school essay. I have a really hard time organizing ideas and this is all that ...

“He’s dead, isn’t he.” I say after a time. Needs a question mark. “Arael Mountain Pass” wends all the way up to “Naroth” Winds not wends. It’s already the third ...