Dreamworx95

Hi! I'm not really "new" around here but I'm new to the changes to the site. I'm trying to write a review for someone but I'm not sure how to ...

I'm trying to build up my presence again on youngwriterssociety. Things have changed a lot since I last signed on. I would love to offer my thoughts on new pieces. ...

I can't find the forums where I can actually review and submit pieces. Where did they go? I'm lost...lol.

Hi Idraax, thanks for the review. I'm sure you've noticed there are a lot of contrasting images in the poem, which is why I had the "understatements plume" line. It's ...

klotrox16, Thanks for the review! This poem is structured in the form of a villanelle, where the first and last lines of the first stanza repeat themselves in the last ...

Hey davantageous, I love how you put kooky rhyming words togher like "fued" and "skewed" My favorite stanzas are the first and the last. And the second stanza sounds much ...

Thank you. :)

Alien Rooms Hunting for my head within these alien rooms With zombie painted faces so austere Crept behind by walls on which the faithful shadows loom In rooms where deadened ...

Joshuapaul, thank you for your time and suggestions. It's not that I haven't taken the critiques to heart. My family has been going through a difficult time and I haven't ...

pettybage , good to see you again. :) You raise some very interesting points that I would love to discuss. I'm going to keep my reply brief however so that ...

Master Yoda, This story is probably my most favorite thing I've ever done and I'm very proud of it, but your thoughts have humbled me and brought me back down ...

I absolutely agree with you. You should always be grateful for someone taking the time to give you their honest opinion, even if it's not what you want to hear. ...

Hello again pettybage. Good suggestions about the lamps or sailboats. I know I don't need much research for detail in this story, as Will just spends most of the time ...

DSF6647, thank you for braving through this even after you saw the length. My intent was to capture the reader's attention in that first scene, so I'm glad that worked. ...

Thank you so much for the detailed critique, pettybage. To be honest, I wasn't expecting to get a review on this so soon. I appreciate the quick response on this ...