Dreamworx95

Gahh, this is very late. I'm so, so sorry! Hmm, well I can see why you might not like this chapter very much. Wait, that didn't sound right. What I ...

So this is just a little prologue of a story I'm going to be writing in the future, right after I finish my current story, Clover's Curse. I'm just experimenting ...

Ha ha ha, this was brilliant! Rune sat on his saddlebag and poked dismally at the fire, secretly wishing Brand and Tarot would shut up and go to sleep already. ...

Hey guys! I'm back with chapter 12! So glad I've finally finished this. It was really fun to write and I hope it's fun for you to read as well. ...

Hey, this is pretty good! Your writing has improved a lot. Your descriptions were fair, though I'd like to read a bit more detail on the surroundings. The character developement ...

Hey, this is pretty nice. I enjoyed reading it a lot. Rune seems like the typical, pompous hero-knight, one of my favorite archetypes. BUT, I think this story starts off ...

I said I couldn't decide because I was caught between creating characters and plotting, because plotting depends ont the characters, know what I'm saying? It all depends on what they ...

Hey, Scribbler! Whazzup? Lol. So I think that you have a great idea here. The summary of the plot in the beginning was a good move. While I do think ...

Pretty confusing in the beginning, I thought they were humans. I think you handled their different personalities very well. I don't think readers would get the characters mixed up. But ...

Omg- this is brilliant!

I'm baaack! lol Hmm...okay, to begin with, you lost me a little with all the conflicts in this chapter. I didn't really know what was going on, all I knew ...

No need to be nervous. This was actually quite good. I like the faeries theme, and I also like that the faeries here are guys, when in most stories they're ...

Lol. Well, I'm not a total hater of the book but I think this is hilarious. I like how you made Edward stupid. Some of the parts that made me ...

If you paired this with the right tune, you could have a good song.

Yeah, that did help out a bit. Thanks Stori. Major improvement from your prologue. I agree with Haruno, this was a lot more understandable, but parts were still confusing. Everyone ...