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Whoa... Whoa, whoa, whoa. I don't even know what to say or where to begin. Actually, I do: Ugh. I really... just... ugh. I don't like this chapter much. I ...

Woo-hoo! I'm first to leave a review! Damn girl! You were right, this is one kick ass chapter! So that voice that just pops out of the blue every now ...

Well, what do you know? Crazy guy's plane actually worked! Ha, I knew it. I'm not really satisfied with this one... there's some stuff here I'm not happy with. The ...

And on top of that, nothing interesting happens in this chapter to make the wait worth it. What are you talking about?! This chapter was very interesting. I've always wanted ...

You described the new city very nicely. I could really picture the falling snow and the giant cathedral (library). I really like Ealym, too. Seems much more peaceful than the ...

*pats Emma* Aw, cheer up, emo kid. D: Lol, I agree, very emo. Good God, I love writing Kagami's dialogue. I love reading Kagami's dialogue. It sparks a flame of ...

*eye twitches* Me and this chapter do not get along. It's too rushed , Kagami and Emma speak as though they've known each other for ages, the rest of the ...

Another amazing chapter, Zan. You're on a roll! Some good action you got goin' on, and the drama is runnin' wild. There are a few things I should adress, though. ...

Another amazing chapter, Zan. You're on a roll! Some good action you got goin' on, and the drama is runnin' wild. There are a few things I should adress, though. ...

I’m alerted to its presence by a different, darker shade of grey against the clouds, highlighted by the sun setting behind them. Maybe I'm weird, but I think this sounds ...

Wow! Very good, Zan! This was awesome! The detail was fantastic, the dialogue rocked and the drama kept me intrigued. I have to say that this was probably my favorite ...

There’s one week in July when the rain stops, though. National holiday. They have a July in their world? I was under the impression that this was a fantasy world. ...

*Speaking in British accent, with deep, gravelly voice* Hello, Miss Tenshi! How do you do today? Care for some tea? He, he. He. Sorry. I know I'm weird. The rain ...

Chapter 13 - Cow Tippin' Pretty Boys Inspirational Song: You’re So Vain by Carly Simon Peter a.k.a Hangover Guy (the day after he joined the mob) “Well, well, well. Would ...

Very good, Meadow. Mucho improvement. “You know I don’t like being called Tony! Ant sounds better,” I called after her. Hee, I can't help but think this is kind of ...