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  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Land of Tales~Prologue

    Hey, Meadow! So, some of my making-fun-fairytales quirk has rubbed off on you, eh? Glad to hear it, glad to hear it. We need more of these kinds of stories, ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: No title...yet (prologue)

    I enjoy your structured writing style. This story has great potential You do tend to use a lot of commas. Proof read it to make sure there aren't too many. ...

    Mar 15, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Five)

    Guess what? This is my 100th review! Yay! Well, I guess I've been waiting for this for...well, not as long as some other people, but long enough. As fantastic as ...

    Mar 14, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Accidental Rebellion, Ch. 1 - Fate

    Whew! Okay, lots to say about this one. I have to say, I commend you for gram&spell perfection. I couldn't find anything wrong with it grammar wise. Sentences read smoothly ...

    Mar 14, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Japanese Culture

    Omg, I've had those sticks. They are delicious. The japanese are geniuses.

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Collage of the Rain

    Nice! Were these in your backyard or something? Very pretty. I wanna know how you did the last one. If you look closely, tilt your head to the side, scratch ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: No title...yet (prologue)

    Thanks for all the critiques, guys! They're really encouraging. Hugs and kisses. Ankhirke and Zan, I totally agree with you guys, I totally hate that last sentence. I was pretty ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Spring is in the Air

    Oo, very pretty. I especially love the last one. Damn, you captured a good sunset. I also love the peach blossom one. Very beautiful. The purple iris at the top ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Art & Photography Re: Ma evil wizard!

    Whoa, that's awesome! Looks like something out of the Harry Potter books. Wish I could draw that good. I like that his beard covers his entire face....that IS a beard, ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Diaries of a Teenage Vampire: Chapter One

    Hey, welcome to YWS! Okay, first of all, I think this is in the wrong section. I believe it should be in the "scripts" forum, considering that this is only ...

    Mar 13, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Four)

    Whew. That was pretty heavy. I suspect that at least one reader wants my head on a pike at the moment , Well, you're right there. I was hoping you ...

    Mar 10, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: The Piper Legend (Prologue~Edited)

    Ahh, I enjoyed this very much. The descriptions were absolutely breathtaking. Are you seriously only thirteen? Wow. Insane, sis. Since you mentioned that the piper seemed deceptive "underneath his hon

    Mar 10, 2009
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Toga Guy in the Clouds (short story)

    The Toga Guy in the Clouds Cotton candy. Pink lilies. Ivory soap. Though I was aware that I was dreaming, the aroma floating under my nostrils smelled very real. As ...

    Mar 9, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Three)

    I really, really don't like the whole instant kill spell... thing. It just doesn't work, it's really contrived, and I ... ugh. I just can't think of a way to ...

    Mar 9, 2009
  • Fantasy Novels Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Two)

    And if you need help deciding, think of this: many people, many, many people, have died and suffered on both sides of this war; all for the sake of Kagami’s ...

    Mar 9, 2009


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