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Re: The Land of Tales~Prologue
Hey, Meadow! So, some of my making-fun-fairytales quirk has rubbed off on you, eh? Glad to hear it, glad to hear it. We need more of these kinds of stories, ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: No title...yet (prologue)
I enjoy your structured writing style. This story has great potential You do tend to use a lot of commas. Proof read it to make sure there aren't too many. ...
Mar 15, 2009 -
Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Five)
Guess what? This is my 100th review! Yay! Well, I guess I've been waiting for this for...well, not as long as some other people, but long enough. As fantastic as ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: The Accidental Rebellion, Ch. 1 - Fate
Whew! Okay, lots to say about this one. I have to say, I commend you for gram&spell perfection. I couldn't find anything wrong with it grammar wise. Sentences read smoothly ...
Mar 14, 2009 -
Re: Japanese Culture
Omg, I've had those sticks. They are delicious. The japanese are geniuses.
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Collage of the Rain
Nice! Were these in your backyard or something? Very pretty. I wanna know how you did the last one. If you look closely, tilt your head to the side, scratch ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: No title...yet (prologue)
Thanks for all the critiques, guys! They're really encouraging. Hugs and kisses. Ankhirke and Zan, I totally agree with you guys, I totally hate that last sentence. I was pretty ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Spring is in the Air
Oo, very pretty. I especially love the last one. Damn, you captured a good sunset. I also love the peach blossom one. Very beautiful. The purple iris at the top ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Ma evil wizard!
Whoa, that's awesome! Looks like something out of the Harry Potter books. Wish I could draw that good. I like that his beard covers his entire face....that IS a beard, ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Diaries of a Teenage Vampire: Chapter One
Hey, welcome to YWS! Okay, first of all, I think this is in the wrong section. I believe it should be in the "scripts" forum, considering that this is only ...
Mar 13, 2009 -
Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Four)
Whew. That was pretty heavy. I suspect that at least one reader wants my head on a pike at the moment , Well, you're right there. I was hoping you ...
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: The Piper Legend (Prologue~Edited)
Ahh, I enjoyed this very much. The descriptions were absolutely breathtaking. Are you seriously only thirteen? Wow. Insane, sis. Since you mentioned that the piper seemed deceptive "underneath his hon
Mar 10, 2009 -
Re: The Toga Guy in the Clouds (short story)
The Toga Guy in the Clouds Cotton candy. Pink lilies. Ivory soap. Though I was aware that I was dreaming, the aroma floating under my nostrils smelled very real. As ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Three)
I really, really don't like the whole instant kill spell... thing. It just doesn't work, it's really contrived, and I ... ugh. I just can't think of a way to ...
Mar 9, 2009 -
Re: Land of Sky, Land of Rain (Chapter Twenty-Two)
And if you need help deciding, think of this: many people, many, many people, have died and suffered on both sides of this war; all for the sake of Kagami’s ...
Mar 9, 2009
