DreamingOutloud

This seems really good so far! It's very interesting. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Hey, I'm Dreaming and I'm going to try and review this piece for you. (Corrections will be in RED ) The start of another dreadful year , at the most ...

Hey, I just wanted to say that I really enjoyed reading your piece. It was very well written and the characters seemed very cute, but I was also a bit ...

This actually seems genuinely interesting. If you put up a chapter of your story I think that you'd get quite a bit of feedback. Good luck! :)

I love these sort of lists. I have a "30 Things to do before I'm 30" list in my closet somewhere. Needless to say, I've barely put a dent in ...

This story is as cute as can be. I loved the epic fight over the cookie.

Hey, so my name is Dreaming and I will try to review your story. First of all, always try to space things out before posting them here. It helps the ...

So far, I agree with everyone that's posted here. It's too much like Twilight. But who knows, you may go in a completely different direction. Above all, I like your ...

Thank you so much! :) All of you guys have been extremely helpful. I'll make sure not to focus too much on the backstory (because I think that's something I ...

Well, I want to start writing a story, but the problem is I don't know what I can write about. I started a story, it may be stupid and not ...

I have about 332 songs on my Ipod. Some of the artists on there are: - Justin Nozuka - Evanescence - Iron & Wine - Regina Spektor - Alicia Keys ...

I'm a little lost here, but I just wanted to say hi to everyone. I just found this website today and decided to check it out. From some of the ...