Dreami

Maybe I'm being impatient again, but I was kinda hoping for a review by now, lol. Any reason why people are afraid to review my story? Is it too long ...

Okay, don't take this badly and get all mad at me in PMs again, okay? ^.^ I looked, and you have 3 of the 4 most recent posts on this ...

Okay... again, chop this up, because right now, its much too long-winded to be poetry. As the sky becomes darker, and with the rest of the world asleep- I can ...

Oh wow. I liked this. Such a neat way of weaving a story, through everyone else's perspectives. I really got into this, it was very well written. Is this based ...

Well, this isn't really a poem. I think the lines are too long for such, and it's not in any sort of poetry form. I like your 'voice' though, for ...

Err... it's not showing up... ?

Umm, sure, I'll read it. ^.^ If you can review mine in exchange, that would be great.

Copying and Pasting is much easier. If it's big, save it for the Advanced Critiques section, or split it into little sections. Ctrl + Alt + C to Copy Ctrl ...

First off - 'hopeing' is spelled 'hoping' Secondly, this is a very plain poem, with no 'showing' just telling. Nothing interesting, just blah. Did this happen? Did this happen? The ...

This should definately be a longer section. ^.^ And parts are very detailed, and then skipped to bluntness. Who is this Chris Mathews person? Why is he waiting for a ...

Personally, I wouldn't use caps. They're distracting. You could also add a comma in here: If you are reading this, then you know I am dead. You could probably change ...

There is some very interesting imagery here. I'd like it to have less vagueness, even though it is supposed to be like this. I think if you use more interesting ...

Well, the 'pls,pls!' was distracting at the beginning, but on to a review. The land flurished, and the people with it. If ever [perhaps whenever?] something rose to threaten the ...

One of those things from years ago that I'm embarrassed I wrote.

I think the Pack will have no problems beating the Cowboys this time - they had some really important players missing, like Woodson and KGB. Farve just needs to play ...