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Kinky Monkey, its way too short. No offense, but it reminds me of a short poem on a valentine card. You can do better than that.:wink: Ellaborate on the idea. ...

Cool poem! Its really well written, good descriptions. Its a solid piece of work. The only thing that could be better is the rhyming. Like, In the first stanza, you ...

emotion_less, that's really pretty! The only thing that I kind of dislike is the spacing of the poem. To me, it seems almost too spaced-out now. This is the way ...

Well Stereophonic, your poem wasn't too bad for your first time, although I think it needs a few tweaks to make it even better. :wink: I like the idea of ...

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That was a very good story, I really enjoy your work. I didn't find much that seemed wrong with it. Sorry, I usually don't edit stories, but I liked it. ...

Woah! I am not alone! I love Star War! There are other dorks in this world besides me! Just Kiddin' :wink: But yeah, I really hated Episodes 1 & 2. ...

Dude, where's the nearest plastic surgeon? What would you say if you had to work in a fast food resturant for the rest of your life?

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You have good writing skills, Liz, but you are getting so caught up with changing your writing style into all fancy descriptions, you are forgetting to actually explain the situation, ...

Spirituality Just reminded me of that. I go to a Christian school, and this one kid had a devotion on Spiritual Battles. So, I make odd connections, but I guess ...

Yeah... something someone drew... BESIDES Menga! :P lol. Anyways, I love to draw horses, ride horses, and everything else. Horses rock. I wish I had one. I envy those people ...

Dear Members of this forum, I thought some of you may be interested in reading an essay I wrote for a contest, and is currently entered. This is totally my ...

I dont really form a picture of people online so I kinda have to think about this...hmm. I definitely see nightowl like you do, Skye Demon, except maybe with olive ...