Dreami

A teenager, with dark blonde hair and intense brown eyes, with a dashing smile. Friendly, but a little shy. Ciaran (F)

Here's a few shots I've already uploaded, I'm gonna upload some more tonight:

Overall, very pretty. You move nicely from subject to subject. The inky darkness gives way and the earth's vision is restored once again. Personally. I think it would sound better ...

This was a terrible cheap rip-off of Lord of the Rings. May no one ever feel the pain of reading it again. ;-)

I'm with some of the other people on here who say Lord of the Rings is helpful music to listen to! I love to listen to the soundtrack, and will ...

Hey guys! I doubt that any of you remember me, but I was on this site in 2005 for several months, then left. I decided to track you guys down ...

It is interesting, I agree with that, and the rhyming could be better. Personally, I hate all rhyming, it just constricts the poem, but here that wasn't the problem. Here ...

Spongebob Square Pants

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This idea is good, but theres some improvements that need to be made.I'll start at the top. First, the "to" you want to use is "too", signifying overdone, or also. ...

Okay, your story is very interesting, I like it. But the context doesn't give the reader a clear reason of why this girl ran away. I believe, from what I ...

Thats really a cool poem, there was just one thing I noticed. In some parts, you talked right to the black sleeves lady, but in others you just talk about ...

Ah, but those are what I was going to get niteowl! :wink: :roll: Dear Losing Genius: Get the heck off this site!!! WASP. Dear WASP: I have this sincer love ...

Lol, thanks. And yes, I am back. Its been a long time. :wink: And thanks for the idea. *sigh* Its nice to be back. And I'll be staying for good ...

I wouldn't ever use one. I know a friend that got in a ton of trouble for posting on one. She was venting about riding and this one lady, the ...