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DreamWriter99

  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: The Track Star

    Sorry if the track info isn't correct. I'm not so great at sports because I'm a klutz! _____________________________________________________________________________________ I closed my eyes. This was

    May 16, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Love is Like the Rain!

    I can relate to this pretty well. My relationship with my boyfriend has never been great. But after a while, you learn to enjoy it. Similies is something I always ...

    May 16, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Maroon

    I really like this since I'm a nature freak and leave near the ocean. And I also get a mystery feeling to it, I hope that was what you were ...

    May 15, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Faith (Religious)

    It's a bit religious. I just want to put a little warning to those who aren't believers~ __________________________________________________________________________________________ Keep your chin up Ho

    May 14, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: - Ryuzaki -

    I have a new obsession. It's called "Death Note" :smt003 L is my favorite since he's so strange and addicted to sweets. :wink: My goal one day is to draw ...

    Apr 29, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Blue Eyes

    I've been obsessed with eyes lately. :? Sorry, there's no pupils, I tried adding them and I wasn't very happy with it. And yes, I still need practice.

    Apr 19, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Us Pirates We're Hardcore ( a Tik Tok by Ke$ha parody)

    I'd LOVE if they really made a parody of this. I will totally listen to it all the time! :elephant: Do you mind if I show my friends? I'll give ...

    Apr 14, 2010
  • Art & Photography Re: Golden Eyes.

    I need Practice. Tell me if I should continue or not..

    Apr 14, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: A Love Letter.

    Aw, how touching! :) I do see plenty of grammar mistakes but, I even make those a lot. I think most of the others showed you your mistakes also. I, ...

    Apr 14, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Differences

    I have brown hair She has blond, But you'll see more hair At the hair salon. I have gray eyes He has light blue, But all eyes are pretty From ...

    Apr 14, 2010
  • Fantasy Short Stories Re: The Lost Stranger

    The girl takes steps very slowly and looks all around her. She knows she isn't safe here. Her scars are there to prove it. "This is a savage planet." she ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: I'll always be here!

    Aw, how cute. :) You could use some help with grammer, nouns, and spelling. But other than that it's really good. I can see the moral and I can relate ...

    Apr 7, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Friendship will die

    Good job. But try to make things together and not just so...'random.' I think that's how you could say it. Try to make the lines stay with the subject. And ...

    Mar 28, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: On the Inside

    There is a girl who is always great Her face always has a smile Her hair always look gorgeous She also has the cutest styles Everyone absolutely loves her Because ...

    Mar 28, 2010
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: You've Changed

    I think about all the things we've been through And all the simple "I love you's". Those were the days you always smiled. Those were the days we all acted ...

    Mar 23, 2010


You have to be a bit of a liar to tell a story the right way.
— Patrick Rothfuss, The Name of the Wind