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  • Other Poetry Re: No Room for Words

    niteowl, thank you so much for the review! Concerning the semicolon happiness: I agree. My english teacher this past year called me a "spazz" because in an essay I wrote ...

    Jun 9, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: No Room for Words

    Yeah, now that I go back through and read it again to myself outloud, it does seem kind of rushed...thanks for the review!

    Jun 8, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Jewish Duet

    Ten words from a dictionary, huh? I should try that help get the creative juices flowing! Keep up the good work! You're a great writer!

    Jun 8, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: No Room for Words

    So...I'm pretty much an idiot...and don't really now how this is supposed to work. :D So bear with me! No Room for Words Words. Syllables. Letters. Talking. Chattering. Whispering. Once ...

    Jun 8, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: Jewish Duet

    Wow! This is beautiful! I feel kind of dumb because I had to look up a few of those words...but I love the tone of this poem. The meter is ...

    Jun 8, 2009
  • Other Poetry Re: March 30th, 1991

    This is really good, although the line "sometimes I think I fell off the Ark," is kind of strange. I'm sure it's referring to Noah...but I like it anyway. Keep ...

    Jun 8, 2009


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— Marcel Proust