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  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Just another day

    Hey thank you for reviewing my story . i really appreciate it, i did not mine you pointing out all the errors in my story, that is the reason why ...

    Aug 12, 2010
  • Romantic Short Stories Re: Just another day

    Hey :D this is one of my old story that i have been working on , some of you may have already ready my intro, and gave me some feedback, ...

    Aug 12, 2010


No, it's not that you didn't succeed. You accomplished a lot, but, if you want to touch people, don't concentrate so much on rhyme and metre. Think more about what you want to say instead of how you're saying it.
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