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Re: CinderAllen. Chapter 1.
This is my first romance so any tips or feed back would be welcomed. Chapter 1. When I was five years old, my mother married Richard Lordly. As we waited ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: CinderAllen. Chapter 2.
Next chapter. :) Chapter 2. Three years later. “Allen, I need you to pick me up some flowers for Stacy.” I glanced up from the hood of the Buick I ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: How do I delete a chapter?
I posted the same chapter twice and now I can't figure out how to delete one of them. I tried to but when I did it asked me if I ...
Nov 28, 2011 -
Re: Deleted.
My first time to try a romance. Any tips or feed back would be welcomed. Thanks for reading. :) ~DG Hey I think I may have deleted this post could ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Deleted.
My first time to try a romance. Any tips or feed back would be welcomed. Thanks for reading. :) ~DG Chapter 1. When I was five years old my mother ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: How do you think the person above you looks?
Blonde hair that you always braid. Your attire normally consists of jeans, a T shirt and cowboy boots. You have blue green eyes and your nose is just the tinyest ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: How do you think the person above you looks?
Not quite blonde, not quite brown hair pulled back in a sloppy pony tail. Hazel eyes, a round face and everyone tells you that you have a beautiful smile. Has ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: The Red Cloak Part 6
The plot thickens. I must say this story is very interesting. Not at all what one would expect of the story of Red Riding Hood, but deeper than your previous ...
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: Feathers of Fire
water fire.jpg This is for a contest, not really sure how to posted a picture though. I think it worked. :)
Nov 22, 2011 -
Re: In the glass part 9
Ohhh, my favorite one so far. I can not critique this, I can only love it. I'm sorry Leah. I love how you've brought this story along. I'm on the ...
Nov 2, 2011 -
Re: In the Glass Part 7
i've been waiting for this part so I was happy to see you had posted. I thought this was great, though, like the other parts, a llittle on the short ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Lerra
My biggest problem with this was that you called it a horror story. Maybe something's wrong with me but this didn't give me that creepy feeling in my gut that ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: Bob the Tumor
Well I said I'd review this but have been putting it off because I dislike having to review when there is nothing I can say will make the piece better. ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: How To Crash A Wedding
Wow, unexpected ending. I don't really know what to say. It was weird and confusing. I felt like I didn't understand what was going on. For a little while I ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [7]
Banned for being a ipod addict. Don't you know addictions are bad? ;)
Oct 30, 2011
