Dragongirl

Hey Blue, If you have time could you maybe check out the first chapter to my novel CinderAllen? Here is a link. Thank you so much! ~DG

Californiagirl

"I don't thinks so...*pats self down and steps in front of a window* Then, "Hold the phone... I'M SPARKLING! Oh...Hang on...false alarm, it was just a bit of glittler." TUBM: ...

Read for to long and the book closed on you. Leaving you swashed between the pages.

That is a LIE!!!!!!! TUBM: Knows how to pick a lock.

HMmmm…cOnFuSeD pErSoN... :) Well, not sure how to review this because frankly< I've not read a piece like this before. So for starters, points for originality. I didn't spot many ...

Ok, so you've been so good about checking out my story 'CinderAllen' and reviewing it that I figured it would only be fair if I did the same for you. ...

So this is my first year and I must say this site has made me a writer. (I just thought I was one when I joined. :wink: ) Seems like ...

Well I did this chapter from a different point of view and I'm not sure if it was the right thing to do. So please any comments on what you ...

Hey there Mate, first let me just say welcome to the YWS! Now about this post. Not really sure what to say about this. It is....interesting. Let's start with the ...

Wow. I really liked this. So different from the normal stuff you read on here. I thought this line was very good. leaving a track of brine That was a ...

Hey there folks! Thanks to everyone who has read the chapters that I've aready posted. Hope you like this one. Chapter 3. At 6:00 PM the limo pulled up in ...

Once again, thanks. :D

Okay I liked this story a lot, but.... It needs to be a tad bit more original. Don't get me wrong you have set Peter Pan in a modern world ...

Thanks Rosey, you are the best. I will do as you say and make it invisible. (If I can figure out how to do that.) Thanks a bunch for answering ...