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Re: Shaping (revised)
Interesting........Way too short. That's what comes to mind after reading this piece. I like Merrym and despite the fact that Luca doesn't say a word, I find myself liking him ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Hi, I'm....
Thanks ziggiefred, I like my avatar too. ;) As for how many books I've completed....well only one, and its not very long or very good, but hey, that's why I ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: The Past, The Present And The Revenge Chapter 1
Ok, let me see if I've got this right.... there is Goku, Chichi, Gohan, Goten, Pan, Videl, Vegeta, Bulla, and Bulma, all in the first chapter. I'm not against having ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: My little hold
Wow, good job. The first two verses were very nice. They both had rythm and rhyme. The last verse though seemed a tiny bit choppy. Alone I weep, I cannot ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Green Trees Leap
Weird...... I like it. :) The poem reminded me of something Dr Suess would write. One part I didn't really get(well.. I really didn't get the whole poem.;)) but one ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Hi, I'm....
I like a lot of different kinds books. Action and fantasy are two kinds I really enjoy. :D As for what I meant by finally , I have wanted to ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Moonlight
Thanks for the reviews.:) I went back and fixed some of the mess-ups. Some one wrote they thought it should be "Step" not "Stop softly in to the moonlight". That ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: The Writer's Lament
Funny. I like how the person in this keeps heading back to the fridge. Reminds me of my self. "Pages on the floor...slipped today...almost broke my back." This seened a ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Moonlight
This is my first time to put any thing on YWS. Hope you like it. Hey for the contest, the emotion I want to convey to reader is serenity. Moonlight ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Diary of a Lost Soul
I loved it! Such a sad sweet story. I didn't think it was a bit creepy. It was an easy read and well written. The only thing that I was ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Hi, I'm....
Hi, just figured I'd introduce myself. I'm Dragongirl. I'm so excited to have finally joined the YWS!!! :D So, whats there to say about myself? I'm just slightly insane and ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: Ogygia-part 6
Good job. I think this is a really neat idea for a story. The one thing I don't love is how fast Calypso seems to gives up. Then she decides ...
Jun 2, 2011
