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Re: Family Matters. Chapter 2.
Well here is the next chapter of my story. If you haven't read the first chapter, you might want too. Please tell me what you think about this. Feel free ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Booty Shorts
Hilarious!!!! I found this genuinely funny and extremely refreshing. You put what everyone is thinking into a great snappy poem. Very nice job. I totally agree with the message you're ...
Jun 16, 2011 -
Re: Random
Love it!!!!! I don't normally like poetry that doesn't rhyme, but this one....I got to hand it to you.... It rocked! The first two lines had me hooked from the ...
Jun 7, 2011 -
Re: I'm Giving You Up.
Nice. An easy read and well written with a lot of feeling behind it. I don't have any complaints. :) Great job~ Dragongirl
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Love gun
Wow...Looks like Cupid upgraded. :D This drawing is really good. Love the idea. Love gun...they'll never know what hit them.;) ~Dragongirl
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Deadly Heat!
Reading this I chuckled. I liked the way you just sort of slammed the words out there, and because this poem is the way I've been feeling all day, I ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Remembering Emily
Hmmmm...Intriguing. I don't normally like romance novels but I think you that you might have me hooked with this one. Anyway, I noticed a couple misspelled words. "Then why are ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Witchlight- Chapter 3
Not too shabby... This is an interesting story. I don't really know what to make of it, but I think it is well written. The only thing that I don't ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Never hope for that
Well said! I LOVE this. I think you pretty much nailed it right on the favorite lines... And love is definitely not fifteen minutes of sweaty bliss Love is sacrifice, ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Family Matters. Chapter 1.
This is a halfblood story, but almost all the characters are mine so I didn't really know if it should go in fanfiction. So here it is. Enjoy.... hopefully. :? ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Impression of a Generation
, whisper the truth is out there. I like the message you have going here. ' Be your own person.' Very true. I attached this this quote, not only 'cause ...
Jun 4, 2011 -
Re: Hello everyone :)
Hi Tim, I feel a little weird welcoming you to YWS because I'm new my self. Welcome anyways. :D I think you'll really like it here, I know, I love ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Tall Tales
Well done! Like the first verse, like the third, the second one, however, doesn't really rhyme. Always expecting failure, And when you succeed it's a surprise, Pull back the curtains, ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: The Voyage of the Pied Piper Ch3
Other than having no morals what so ever, this story rocks! I love your style. the captain is as cold and black hearted as a pirate captain should be, and ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Disgrace to Wolf - 1
Neat idea. Son of a dragon, cool. Definantly a lot you could do with that. I like Shadow, he's cute. The only thing is he is a little too cute. ...
Jun 3, 2011
