Dragongirl

I just finished reading all the chapters you have posted and let me just say This is such a great story! I love it! Dandelion is a great MC but ...

Excellent. Straight up good. I really enjoyed this piece. I normally like to put in a favorite line when I review a poem, but this have so many parts I ...

Salutation, glad to have you join the ranks of theYWS. I'm looking forward to reading some of your stuff. So what sort of writing do you do? fantasy? sci-fic? fiction? ...

If you are reading this you are either left-handed or an imposter. Yes you right hand people this is for the leftys so back away slowly or pledge immediately to ...

Nice, I like it. I haven't read any of the previous chapters but you've got me hooked. So I don't know for sure whats going on but let me just ...

Hey, welcome! Let me just start off by telling you you're going to love this place. I've been here for about a month and let me tell you, this place ...

Holy smokes, this is good!!! Let me just start out by say this was nothing like I expected it to be. Your desriptions rock. I felt like I could see ...

Ok, you talked me into it. :) I'm going to put every two couplets together. The reason I didn't do this before was because I thought some of the lines ...

I like this. Kind of creepy, but good. Who knew those little kid fairy tales could be so scary. I don't know if you plan on making this a novel ...

All righty, this is the first of your story that I've read so I'm a little confused. However I think this is very very well written. The characters are interesting ...

Ok, I just finished part 1 and part 2 and let me just say......Hahahahaha!!!! Hilarious! Loved this. Randy and Bill are just so funny. My favorite line from part 1 ...

Wow, Bridget is very witchy. Nice job on her, she is a very interesting character. I thought it was funny how she hates her body and that is the main ...

Not entirely sure what I think of this. It is well written, but....There is a lot of things I didn't like about it. Number one being the swearing. Come on, ...

Hope you like this, I got the inspiration for it while sitting in church. I must admit that after the idea hit me I didn't hear another word of the ...

I smiled the whole time I read this short story (if you can call it that.) I've never read anything like it and frankly, my friend, I loved it. :) ...