Dragongirl

I like this. It grabbed my attention from the start and is fresh and different. You got me to thinking when you had Gracie ask which legend should be given ...

I'd like a partner.

Nnnnnnnnnnnnnnoooooooooooo, *pause for a long breath, then..* Nnnnnnnoooooooooooooooo. I knew it, I knew he was going to die. Great story, great characters, great action- Lame predictable ending. Stra

Holy cow Pyro! You've done it again. You managed to pack all three of these chapters chalk full with suspence and action, despite the fact that the entire town consisted ...

You were right, Peter is the worsed. Oh I hate him, I hate him, I hate him. Due to your top notch writing I will never be able to look ...

Excellent. Thoroughly enjoyable. I like the growth in John. The change you see in him. Really him becoming a man is what it is, I suppous. Thought Jane was a ...

Hope you enjoy this short story I've written. This is like the first short story I've ever really wrote, so please review it 'cause i have no ides if its ...

Mike, you're killing me, man. All I can say is thank goodness you're not a slow poster. I'll be eagerly watching for the next chapter. :) ~DG

Do you remember in the last review I did to this story? How I said I though the dialogue might be a bit stiff? Well, I want you to take ...

Alright I suppose you can stay, but if you're a righty I don't think you will find this very interesting. Just don't say I didn't warn you. Well, I'm right ...

Dude, this rocks! I just finished reading all the chapters that you posted of this story and it is really good. You kept me on the edge of my seat ...

Not too sabby, MEG, I'm so happy you decided to post this story! You must hurry up and post the next chapter so then you can post the third chapter ...

Ohhh, this ending made me happy. You compleatly had me tricked. I just knew Windsor was going to die, and I was all like, there is no other way *sniff*sniff* ...

Nice! I really don't know what to say other than 'I love this!' and 'I must have more' :) What else can I say when it's already so dang good? ...

Wow. Thats all I can say. I just finish reading all 7chapters you've posted. You sure can write. You've put action, powers, and a christain theme in one story. I'm ...