Dragongirl

Here is the next chapter. Please tear it apart. :pirate2: Chapter 4. Jagger spent the night at the big house. Lilly had shown him up to the huge southern style ...

Mavrick Lock Mav. Even after they had got back to the campsite and settled into their post, Mavrick ran the nickname Lire had given him over in his head. He ...

Mavrick Lock "I can take second watch." Mavrick spoke up. He was liking this Dill character more every moment. He had watched the ease Dill had stepped into leadership with, ...

Mavrick Lock Mavrick sat comfortably in the limo. Soft conversation overlapped as the the contestants got to know each other. Glancing over at the two men, Dill and Ten, his ...

Mavrick Lock Mavrick shrugged self consious in his suit. Glancing around the room he appraised the people around him. Judging by the majority of their appearance he was fairly sure ...

Mavrick Lock Mavrivk's black leather shoes clicked sharply on the hard white marble as he left the gale. It was really to early for him to be leaving, but he'd ...

If you haven't read the first two chapters of this, you might want to. Otherwise, you could become very confused. :shock: Chapter 3. A car door slammed and Jagger snapped ...

Here is my character... Name: Mavrick Lock Gender: Male Age: 18 Weapon: Morning star; a medieval club like weapon which incudes one or more spikes. Used in a combination of ...

Save a guy spot for me please. I'll get the profile filled out in the next couple days.

Well written.... crummy message. I thought that this would end very differently, like I don't know..maybe her NOT comiting suicide. But my personal opinion aside, nicely done. I notice a ...

I found this poem to be thought prevoking and fresh. The thing I didn't like so much about it was that you see to be on the fence when it ...

I though this was a lovely idea, though perhaps a tad bit unoriginal, but still enjoyable. I felt, as others who reviewed, that this was a bit hard to read. ...

Not really sure where this is going. I clicked on it because I thought the name sounded interesting and I thought the way you used 'Levels' instead of chapters was ...

Chuckles. This story had me smiling and laughing the whole way through. When I read the title and saw you name underneath it, I'll be honest, I rolled my eyes ...

Top notch poem! I think it is a wonderfully goofy poem and is a great way to remind us 4-Hers not to take our selfs to seriously. :) favorite verse; ...