Dragongirl

I am writing a story and I love to jump right into the action. As a reader do you find this annoying? Do you like be thrown right into the ...

Wow this is really good. I think your style sounds alot like R.R.'s, which is great, only I think because your character is first person you need to be careful ...

I didn't like this story until the last line. And then he found another girl. And then I love it. I think you found your own unique to show the ...

Dragonette, about Lilly being the wrong gender. Yes I knew that satyrs are technically only supposed to be male when I wrote Lilly, but I figured as a writer I'm ...

Ok, you said you were havind a little trouble with this bit. Breathing hard, Jordin lowered her aching arms and jogged over to the next asignment. Tell's apple. The great ...

A Proverbs 31 Women. A virtuous women is priceless For they are few and far in between. Her home is run smooth and viceless, A tidier one never seen. The ...

Okay, I read this a couple months back and liked it, so I today decided to check and see if you'd written any more. I was totally surprise by all ...

I don't think you could be human and not have this piece touch you, especially if you're an american. I really loved it. I thought you did a wonderful job ...

Chapter 6 . Jagger found Bruno relaxing in a hammock by the lake laughing and joking with several other buff looking teens. They stopped talking as Jagger neared, their faces ...

Mavrick Lock "Well we didn't want him to get angery and we didn't want you to get angery at us. Lets face it that's a likely scenario and I'm sick ...

Okay, I hate you. Not really, but I am totally jealous. I never could have written anything as good as this piece when I was 14 and I have the ...

Almost done, only one more chapter to post after this....I think. Chapter 5. Jagger didn’t get to talk to Chelsea until after the lesson. Turning in his bow, he walked ...

For those of you that don't know what a Morning Star is, it is a club like weapon they used in the middle ages The club has a spiked head ...

Sorry that I haven't got around to reviewing this sooner. I meant to but it totally slipped my mind. So, here I am, reviewing. :) Just to start off I ...

Bravo! Loved this! I was smiling and laughing the whole way through. I also found this easy to relate to. I mean, what little girl hasn't wanted a horse? I ...