Dragongirl

Have you ever read the Ranger's Apprentice series? The reason I ask is because this stroy reminds me of that serie. Not like the whole thing or anything, just bits ...

Alright, besides the fact that the whole werewolves vs vampires is completely overdone and unoriginal, I thought this was fairly good. I defiantly, am ready for the next chapter. :) ...

Very funny, but before I get to the good stuff I want to mention a couple things that I didn't like. I didn't love the way you started this story. ...

Personally, I have always disliked the story of the frog prince. The princess always seemed like a brat, ungrateful and rather stupid. I always felt quite sorry for the enchanted ...

I'm going to be honest and truthfully I didn't want to review this because it was to good, but as you can see I rejected that urge because here I ...

Here is the next chapter, People. Sorry if this chapter is a little short. Hope you guys like it anyway. Any suggestion are always appreciated. :smt003 Chapter 3. Go Fish ...

Scary.

Wow, this poem is charged with emotion. It had nice flow and drew me in right from the start.However I did notice a few nitpicks. This feeling of uncertainty a ...

Alright T, I 've been following this story and I've noticed a few things. Number one, you have way to many chapters. Most of you chapters are so short that ...

This poem is a beautiful piece and I enjoyed it. However, at first glance I was a bit daunted by the sheer bulk of it. The fact that you didn't ...

Okay....First I'm like, wow and then I'm like, what? I found this poem confusing and disturbing. However, oddly enough, I like it. I don't even really know why. I think ...

Okay folks, heres the second chapter to Hook. I know it is rough. I would love tips and feed back. Thanks. Chapter 2. What's Your Lucky Number? The guard by ...

Piece of cake. dragongirl Yes, I know, I'm amazing. 8) I can't believe I just waste my time on something like this. It almost as bad as watching(heaven forbid) SpongeBob. ...

Here is another short story, this is only the second one I've ever written so any suggestions on how to improve are welcome. Hope you like it. The doctors say ...

This is a story I started last year so some of the writing is a little rougher than I would like it to be, so please, tear this to bits. ...