Dragonette

Ace~ Dionysus The bright morning sun came in through the window and shone in my eyes. I squinted my eyes, but the light seemed determined to wake me up. Finally ...

Hope this is ok! If anything is bothering you, let me know and I'll fix it :D Name: Ace Masilko Age: 16 Parents: Karen Masilko and Dionysus Appearance : Ace ...

Hiya! I'm Dragonette and I will review your story for you today :D Now, I didn't have time to read the first part of your story :/ but I'm a ...

Ooooooooooooo That's pretty neat ;) I like it. And you are very pretty btw :D

[b]Next, if I think your next chapter is what I think it's going to be, you've set Ryan up to encounter a monster and therefore to reveal something about him ...

*likes*...*a lot*

This was good. As usual ;) But my job here is to point out this stuff that could help you make it better. So here are my nit-picks :D Ok, ...

Here is the second half to Chapter two. Hope you like it :D Please review after you read. P.S. If you haven't read the first half of the chapter, you ...

Hey, thanks for your guys' honest imput, and I'm sorry Kaedee, but I don't have a spell-check so I can't do that :/ But about being unique. I understand your ...

Alright, thank you both so much :D I will think over what you guys said and make the apropriate decision :D Again, I appreciate your help.

Warning! You are about to read a post by a horrible speller whose computer does not own a spell check. You were warned. I guess it all really started on ...

Thanks for reviewing my story guys! DeathCurrent, let me explain: That's probably not the best, but maybe it will give you some ideas as to how to re-word it. I ...

Hey, I'm Dragonette, and I'm a big nerd when it comes to Percy Jackson, so I decided to write a novel about it! I'm super excited about my novel and ...

Hey, it's me again Comin' to review your story :D Alright, it's good as usual, but I have some stuff to point out. Firstly: “It's when your godly parent makes ...

Thanks to everyone read this all the way through. I don't know if I should write any more. I originally wrote this for a contest my sisters and I did, ...